Sunday, July 24, 2016

Final Blog Post on A Thousand Splendid Suns

My learning strategy while I read the novel:
the excessive use of sticky notes
A Thousand Splendid Suns: 
Final Remarks
Khaled Hosseini's A Thousand Splendid Suns offered me the chance to explore a facet of the women's right movement that I haven't investigated before: the fight for universal and easily-accessible education. 

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book, despite the fact that it made me cry at the end (happy tears, not sad tears). This novel, its characters, and its intense plot enthralled me. It was a good choice as an ISU novel, because it showed feminism as being a fight for women to possess the right to being dignified people, rather than just objects that a man can possessively use to feel like he's in control. 

I do not consider myself to fit the mold of the modern-day feminist, as I align better with the belief that all humans should be treated with respect and dignity. From reading this novel, I can more clearly articulate my view of feminism. Although I believe women and men should have rights that protect them as individuals, I believe that we are different, and that women will never be directly "equal" to men. Lara summed up my beliefs in her post on her novel, The Illegal: "The simple fact is, men and women are different. That does not mean that we cannot exist in harmony with one another." (the very intelligent Lara.C). 

In addition to my reconsideration of my stance on feminism, I could personally connect to the characters (I did not include this in my reader's response because it is personal), which also made me become invested in Mariam and Laila's emotional turmoil, and their struggle to feel deeply loved and respected. 

This novel will forever stay in my heart, as I feel that it has helped me discover more about where I stand on women's rights issues. One of the most important pieces of advice that I take away from this novel is to "ENDURE" (Nana, pg. 18). Through taking this course, and my past struggles in life, I conclude that in order to get through the challenges you are faced with in your life, you must love, have hope, and ENDURE

A Thousand Splendid Suns Concept Map

This concept Map analyzes how women are treated in Afghanistan, the gender roles they must conform to, and the fight for women's rights.

To Be An Afghan Woman Means.....

Shareable Link To "A Journey Through The Middle East" Presentation

Here is a link to the slideshow presentation I created: A Journey Through the Middle East: Women in Afghanistan

Argumentative Essay

Name: Chloe Coulson
Course: ENG4UV
Submitted to: Mr. Conway
Date: July 24, 2016

Gender Inequality in the Middle East:
Women’s Oppression and the Universal Education Movement


Women have long been inferior members of society due to a wide-spread universal male-dominant culture that dictates how they should live their lives. For hundreds of years, women in different cultures around the world have struggled to gain power status and change how men view them based on stereotypical gender roles. For instance, in biblical times, women were housewives who were expected to, “submit yourselves to your own husbands as you do to the Lord” (Ephesians 5:22 NIV). Women from this era were expected to obey male figures, as this was a social teaching of the Bible. Likewise to this time period, Afghan women are still battling these extreme gender prejudices in their country. Throughout time, women in the Middle East have been denied their right to education. This form of oppression has prevented gender equality, thus forcing women to speak up for their right to be educated and knowledgeable citizens.

Education help children and youth to become more knowledgeable and experienced individuals. It is argued that sharing the truth through education eradicates ignorance and blind naivety in terms of how children see themselves, others, and society. As former South African president and philanthropist Nelson Mandela once stated, “Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world” (Brainy Quote). Mandela’s quote demonstrates that all children, both male and female, benefit from learning in the classroom. In Afghanistan, however, a woman’s right to education is restricted due to the rigid social practices of their culture.

Historically, Afghan women were housewives who cared for their children, and followed their religion by obeying their husbands without question. Within the past decade, there has been an increased liberal movement in their country, however the majority still abide by these strict social teachings. Most Afghans believe in Islam, which dictates that, “. . . Wives have the same rights as the husbands have on them in accordance with the generally known principles. Of course, men are a degree above them in status . . .” (Sayyid Abul A'La Maududi, The Meaning of the Qur'an, vol. 1, p. 165). Although this quote claims that women have the same rights as men, the belief that men are superior in status leads them to feel that they can control women. The Qur’an’s portrayal of women as the inferior sex has resulted in a culture that emotionally, physically and sexually abuses women in order to make them submissive to their male counterparts. 

In addition to the direct portrayal of women as the weaker sex, radical interpretation of the Qur’an has led to the formation of The Taliban, an Islamic group in the Middle East that believes in the literal meaning of the Qur’an, rather than its contextual meaning. Created in 1994, the Taliban implemented law that stated that all paintings, literature, film and music be banished from society. Strict social expectations were also outlined, including the expectation that all women were to obey their husbands (or they would be punished). These extremist fighters have additionally dictated that girls ten years of age and older cannot receive an education, nor can they hold the status as a working woman (this excludes prostitution and sex work). The only acceptable form of education for girls over the age of ten is the teaching of the Qur’an, or any other holy scripture.  Should a woman choose to go against the Taliban’s ruling on education, she would be publicly executed for disobeying their holy text. Males, in comparison, are not restricted from being academically educated. The Taliban’s law on education excludes young boys and men who are training to enter certain career fields such as engineering and medicine. Men are, therefore, encouraged to learn because they are thought to possess higher social status than women, and they are thought to be more intelligent. This additionally underscores in the Afghan culture, the belief that women are not intelligent enough to learn in school, and to secure employment.

The oppression that women face in Afghanistan has stifled their right to learn basic skills, such as arithmetic and written and oral Farsi (Afghanistan’s official language). According to a 2013 survey conducted by UNdata.org, only twenty four percent of women have third-level education status (post-secondary education) in the Afghanistan region. As a result, women cannot hold jobs and be independent citizens. Instead of fostering a sense of women’s strength, the law the Taliban has suppressed women and caused them to develop a lower level of self-confidence. With the belief that men are “a degree above them,” and the social practice that demands they do not seek to be more powerful than men, women struggle to believe in their ability to be successful teachers, business women or doctors. They are challenged to imagine their potential because they are targeted by the Taliban’s radical view of how women should live their lives. By allowing men to receive an education and find employment, women do not have an equal opportunity to showcase their qualities and skills in the work world.

Afghanistan’s current economic status is poor, as a consequence of the on-going war within its borders. According to WorldBank.com, “Economic growth increased only marginally from 1.3 percent in 2014 to an estimated 1.5 percent in 2015.” Afghanistan’s government is in the midst of a financial crisis that has caused poverty, famine and countless deaths. Educating women so that they can enter the workforce, and contribute to Afghanistan’s economy, would offer greater economic stability, and hope for many who have suffered from the economic downturn. Through varying its economic landscape by allowing women to work, Afghanistan would be able to create more momentum in terms of its financial progression.

The gender inequality that exists in the Middle East has resulted in the establishment of several organizations that help women to advocate for their rights and freedoms. The United Nations, for example, has recently launched a campaign directed at helping empower women through education. Their new initiative to “end violence against women” includes the goal to ensure that all girls and women have the opportunity to receive an education. The United Nations outlines the consequences of allowing societal constraints to oppress a woman’s right to education:

For girls, lack of education has lifelong consequences, such as increasing the likelihood they will enter into situations of economic dependence in which their vulnerability to violence may be increased. For society at large, the transformative potential of girls’ education is immense for the achievement of almost all development goals. (UN.org)

This new campaign aims to raise awareness for women’s education in countries like Afghanistan, where women are discouraged from learning. Through initiatives such as these, the goal is to engage governments and world leaders in the quest to make universal education a reality.

Another forerunner in the women’-right-to-education movement is Malala Yousafzai, the young teen who was nearly killed by the Taliban because she chose to go to school. Malala has become an international symbol of women’s rights through her courageous act of standing up to the radical Islamic group. Malala’s belief in education is supported by her love of learning and helping others. To further her reasoning to advocate for women’s rights, one statistic on her website reads: “In (the world) more than 60 million girls are out of school today” (Source: OHCHR). This piece of data proves that women’s right to education is being denied, both in the Middle East, and in other countries throughout the world. Through encouraging women to be bold in the face of adversity, Malala also spreads awareness of this human rights issue.

Although the Taliban were overthrown after the terror attacks on September 11th, 2001, their existence is still real and poses threat to women’s rights in the Middle East. The new extremist, ISIS, has presented setbacks to promoting women’s education in the Middle East. Followers of this terrorist group are radical believers in the oppression of women, as they encourage men to be leaders in their quest to do what they claim is defending Islam. 

Kafoumba Doumbia, a blogger for Columbia University, argues, “information cannot be converted into knowledge without education. Education makes us capable of interpreting things, among other things. It is not just about lessons in textbooks. It is about the lessons of life” (Ed Lab). Doumbia proves that education benefits all people, young and old, male and female. Through opening the discussion about women’s rights, in particular their right to education, there will be a greater push for world leaders to intervene and implement laws to protect a woman’s right to be educated.

Bringing gender equality to the forefront in society can be interpreted in different ways. For some, this means providing the necessities of life for at-risk women who are struggling to care for their children. For others, it may translate to their belief in fighting for reproductive health and their right to choose. But, for Afghan women empowerment means having a pencil in their hand, a teacher in the classroom, and a right to education.

Works Cited
"Afghanistan Overview." Afghanistan Overview. N.p., n.d. Web. 23 July 2016.
"Articles: Top Ten Rules in the Quran That Oppress Women." Articles: Top Ten Rules in the Quran That Oppress Women. N.p., n.d. Web. 22 July 2016.
"Ephesians 5:22 Wives, Submit Yourselves to Your Own Husbands as You Do to the Lord." Ephesians 5:22 Wives, Submit Yourselves to Your Own Husbands as You Do to the Lord.    N.p., n.d. Web. 22 July 2016.
"Free, Safe, Quality Education Is the Right of Every Girl." The Malala Fund. N.p., n.d. Web. 23 July 2016.
"Prostitution Under the Rule of Taliban." Prostitution Under the Rule of Taliban. N.p., n.d. Web.  22 July 2016.
"Top 10 Education Quotes." BrainyQuote. Xplore, n.d. Web. 22 July 2016.
"United Nations Secretary-General's Campaign to UNiTE To End Violence Against Women, Women, Violence, Charlize Theron, Men Network, Resources, Contact Information,about UNiTE, Who We Are, What We Do, about UNiTE, Latest News, Resources, Take   Action, Action for Schools, Action for Civil Society, Action for Universities, Action for Government and Local Authorities, Press Materials, Campaign Poster, Multimedia, Official UN Documents." UN News Center. UN, n.d. Web. 23 July 2016.
"Who Are the Taliban?" BBC News. N.p., n.d. Web. 22 July 2016.
"Why Is Education So Important in Our Life? | EdLab." Why Is Education So Important in Our Life?EdLab. N.p., n.d. Web. 23 July 2016.


Recent Islamic State Terror Attack

Connection to Culminating Activity 

I was reading the news last night, and I came across an article about a terror attack that occurred yesterday in Kabul, Afghanistan. Considering the similar nature of article and the content within my portfolio, I thought I'd include the beginning of the article here, as well as the link to the website. The article was taken from CTV news, which is obviously a mainstream media source. However, the content is accurate, as the images can attest.
"The Islamic State group has claimed responsibility for a suicide bombing on a peaceful protest in the Afghan capital on Saturday that killed at least 80 people and wounded more than 200, marking the first time the extremists have struck Kabul and raising fears of their growing strength and capability in Afghanistan." -CTV News.ca

80 Dead after Terrorist Attack in Afghanistan

The tragedy that ensues in the Middle East proves that women, who are already vulnerable members of society, are fighting to protect their children and themselves, from danger. 

Works Cited
"80 Dead after Islamic State Attacks Kabul Protest." CTVNews. N.p., n.d. Web. 24 July               2016.
"Quotes About Peace."QuotesGram. N.p., n.d. Web. 24 July 2016. 

Labels: War on Terror, ISIS, Afghanistan 



Friday, July 22, 2016

In the Planning Stages

Planning out my Portfolio 
For the culminating activity of this course, I plan to craft an argumentative essay, a google slide presentation and a concept map. My thesis that will be supported by all three of my media texts is: A Thousand Splendid Suns explores how the gender roles of men and women in society can shape their respective behavior and beliefs. Women are negatively affected by these set gender roles, and as a result, they must transcend the patriarchal constraints of society in order to stand up for their rights and freedoms.
"Planning Stock Photos & Images." Planning Stock Photos, Images, & Pictures – (159,685 Images). N.p., n.d. Web. 22 July 2016.
While I was reading A Thousand Splendid Suns, I was struck by Mariam’s desire to attend school, and learn more about the world around her. The theme of a woman’s struggle to be educated in Afghanistan inspired me to create a thesis for my argumentative essay on why women should have the right to learn in school, and not just in the mosque. As of now, this is my thesis for my essay: Throughout history, Afghan women have been denied their right to education. The on-going oppression of women in the Middle East demonstrates that the lack of universal education is societal concern affects everyone throughout the world. I plan to craft my written composition with supportive data and sources that allow me to prove how the oppression of women in Middle Eastern countries contributes to a lack of economic growth and respect for human life. I will weave in the Taliban’s oppression of women, and the rigid Islamic belief that women should conform to the Koran’s teaching of what it means to be a wife, a mother and a “holy” woman.

The Google slide presentation will include photographs, quotes and videos that promote women’s rights and freedoms. My main goal for the multimedia text is to be able to take viewers on a journey throughout the Middle East to show how women live with the denial of their rights and education. Depending on the length of the slideshow, I may include a brief description or summary of my findings along with the presentation.

Lastly, I will create a concept map that is based on the phrase: “To be an Afghan woman means…” I will keep my focus on the denial of women’s rights in Middle Eastern countries, and I will include quotes from the novel to support my thinking. 

Skills and Next Steps
One of my strengths as a writer is my ability to form new ideas that reflect my past experiences and beliefs. I have focused on the feminist perspective in my portfolio because I don't often associate myself with feminist values, and I want to challenge myself to think differently about feminism. I like to learn about how others view certain topics, so I can better form my opinion on a certain issue/topic.

A challenge I may encounter in creating my chosen writing/media texts is my tendency to overlook the smaller details of media texts. I plan to take extra time to correct any grammatical mistakes, check for logical fallacies and edit out any unnecessary information in my argumentative essay. I will also need to cut down on the time I spend on the concept map, as I will be creating by hand and I want to ensure that I have enough time to effectively create the google slide presentation as well.  


Thursday, July 21, 2016

"A Brave, Honorable, Bighearted Book" -The Washington Post

Recap
Through analyzing A Thousand Splendid Suns from a reader’s response perspective, an archetypal perspective and a feminist perspective, I was able to better understand Hosseini’s purpose of writing this novel. The fictional story was clearly intended to be an empowerment to women, and to illustrate the social inequalities that have been caused by the Taliban’s rule in recent years.

In my first blog post from a reader’s response perspective, I was able to connect the book to my knowledge of the importance of education for children and youth (especially women). Mariam’s desire to be educated reminded me of my right to education, and how fortunate I am to be able to learn and interact with classmates at school. I feel that too many youth take their education for granted, and fail to realize that it is a gift which they should be thankful for. Therefore, it is through instilling the value of education from a young age, that children will become more receptive to learning in school. This novel reaffirmed my belief that education is a critical tool in eliminating ignorance and naivety so that kids can mature into knowledgeable adults. 

Einstein on Education 
The contrast between Mariam’s lack of knowledge, and Laila’s story about her family’s support for education, made me think more deeply about my view of learning. I was able to find an inspiring TED TALK  that is about a woman who was educated in Afghanistan and has since devoted her time to helping educate girls in her country: Dare to educate Afghan girls. This video helped me to draw parallels to how the Taliban were described as being cruel and heartless in the novel, and how family plays a huge role in a child’s disposition.

In addition to my connection to the importance of education, I was touched by Mariam’s struggle to feel loved and appreciated by her mother. Nana often calls Mariam mean names and blames her for problems she doesn’t create. This abuse results in her low self-confidence and inability to stand up to Rasheed during their marriage. The author uses this form of pathos help readers realize that confidence is instilled by one's family, and having a firm foundation within the home leads to better self-worth. Although Laila’s mother is distant due to her depression, her father was very supportive of her education, and demonstrated real parental love, (unlike Mariam's father, Jalil). Seeing the difference between their family situations, I was able to conclude why Laila might have been a more confident character, and why Mariam was unable to stand up for herself in the beginning of the novel. Personally, my family has helped me get through many hurdles in my life, and I am thankful that have such supportive people in my life who make me smile when I need it. This novel reinforced my belief that confidence is dependent upon who you surround yourself with. Overall, I think that the reader's response perspective allowed me to make the most connections to my life, and current-day society.

Final Connection to the Kite Runner
Although The Kite Runner and A Thousand Splendid Suns were set in the same country, and contained similar themes, I think that there were many differences that made A Thousand Splendid Suns much more enjoyable for me to read. Firstly, I really liked that Hosseini wrote this novel from a third person perspective rather than a first person perspective. This helped me better form my opinion on the characters because the narrator was not speaking as character, but rather as a story teller. I find that it is much easier to analyze a character’s qualities, flaws and abilities when I read from a neutral stance. I additionally thought that Hosseini was able to effectively execute emotion in his novel. The Kite Runner had more emotionally flat tone, as the main character was a male who tried to deny his feelings of guilt throughout his life. This novel was clearly written with the help of female editors and/or influences who could contribute to how Mariam and Laila may have felt during their struggle to be equal in their marriage, and in society. Also, there were some idioms and terms written in Farsi that I couldn’t understand. I think the author makes the novel more interesting by incorporating these mysterious words into the text. Likewise to The Kite Runner, A Thousand Splendid Suns tracks the development of a relationship over time. The romance between Tariq and Laila blossoms throughout their lives, and after 10 years of being separated by war, they are reunited together. The connection they share at the end of the novel is an additional touch that made this book a great read.

Final Remarks
This novel was one of the top novels I have read in high school English class. I definitely shared
Source: Quoteaddicts.com 
many connections with the characters, and their struggle to feel loved and supported. Laila and Mariam's friendship is one that I can one day share with a very special, deserving friend. At this point, I do not have any questions for the author, as the story line, the writing and the characters all morphed together to create a phenomenal novel. I would definitely recommend A Thousand Splendid Suns to any female grade 11/12 student who is looking for an insightful and captivating ISU novel!




Works Cited

Khaled Hosseini. A Thousand Splendid Suns. New York: Riverhead Books, 2007.

"Transcript of "Dare to Educate Afghan Girls"" Shabana Basij-Rasikh: Dare to Educate Afghan Girls. N.p., n.d. Web. 21 July 2016.

"Quotes Like." Quotes By Albert Einstein On Education Quotes -. N.p., n.d. Web. 21 July 2016.

Tags: Family, Learning, Friendship 

Unity in the Face of Gender Inequality

The Taliban: A Radical Implementation of Law
In the last third of A Thousand Splendid Suns, the theme of the oppression of women’s rights in the Middle East is further shown due to the wide-spread influence of the Taliban. After political unrest ended between the Soviet Union and Afghanistan in the 1980s, a new force challenges the freedom and rights of women in the country. This is evident when, one day in the late 1990’s, Mariam finds a propaganda flyer about the new implementation of the Taliban’s laws within her community. The flyer discusses gender roles for both men and women in society, but restricts the roles of women more so than men. For men, it is expected that that they always wear a turban, and that they grow out their beards. For every citizen: “singing is forbidden, dancing is forbidden….playing chess, kite flying are forbidden, writing books, watching films, painting pictures are forbidden” (Hosseini, 277). And for women, the expectations are much higher:

                                You will not…show you face. You will cover with burqa when outside. If you do not, you will be severely beaten. Cosmetics are forbidden. Jewelry is forbidden. You will not wear charming clothes. You will not speak unless spoken to. You will not make eye contact with men. You will not laugh in public…..Girls are forbidden from attending school. All schools for girls will be closed immediately. Women are forbidden from working. If you are found guilty of adultery, you will be stoned to death. Listen. Listen well. Obey.  (278)

This flyer clearly demonstrates that women are targeted by the Taliban because they are weaker members of society. Women are seen as sex objects, cooks, cleaners, bearers of children, and people who cannot live without men. Laila and Mariam’s struggle with Rasheed’s abuse is only one of their many problems. Now they must be extra cautious of obeying every rule that is outlined by Taliban, because their lack of rights makes them vulnerable in the eyes of lawful authority.
An Afghan woman walks by the Taliban's alitery base in a burqa.
Mohammad Shoib/Courtesy Reuters
Characters Who Embody Feminism 
The development of a new feminist perspective, however, is shown to change characters’ actions and words. By the end of the novel, Mariam transforms into a selfless and courageous character when she sacrifices her freedom to kill Rasheed. After enduring sexual, physical and emotional abuse, the two women begin to form a strong bond in order to help them get through their struggles. Laila, who provokes Rasheed, makes him so angry to the point that he attempts to strangle her. Mariam, who watches Laila gasp for air, must make the choice to sacrifice her life in order to preserve Laila’s future. She uses a gardening shovel to kill Rasheed without hesitation. This demonstrates her major growth from being a shy, weak and naïve character, to a mature and strong women who no longer tolerates Rasheed’s abuse. After she kills Rasheed, with the knowledge that she will be stoned to death by the Taliban, Mariam decides to ask Laila, who’d become her sister, to leave with Aziza and Laila’s new child, Zalmai. Mariam is then taken to stadium where her public execution takes place. Her pure sacrifice for Laila, and her children, is represented when, in the text, it is stated, “She was leaving the world as a woman who had loved and been loved back. She was leaving it as a friend, a companion, a guardian. A mother…..She should die this way. Not so bad. This was a legitimate end to a life of illegitimate beginnings” (370). Mariam is seen as the ultimate hero in this novel because she gives of her life to protect her family.
Source: Pinterest 

I am inspired by Mariam’s choice to give her life for others because, while she embodies courage and strength, she also shows that humility is an important value that woman to possess. Being a loving friend, a reliable sister, means sacrificing oneself for the good of others. This novel has encouraged me to view feminism in different way than how most view the societal issue. I think part of what it means to be a morally conscious individual is understanding that women should have basic rights that protect their innocence, their safety, and most importantly their dignity as human beings.

Works Cited
"Campaign for Afghan Women & Girls - Feminist Majority Foundation." Campaign for Afghan                   Women & Girls - Feminist Majority Foundation. N.p., n.d. Web. 21 July 2016.

Council on Foreign Relations. Council on Foreign Relations, n.d. Web. 21 July 2016.

Khaled Hosseini. A Thousand Splendid Suns. New York: Riverhead Books, 2007.
Notes
Here is a link to the Feminist Majority Foundation, organization that advocates for the rights and freedoms of women in Afghanistan: Equality Around the World

Tags: Feminism, Friendship, Encouragement  


Sisters in Marriage

Living with Abuse 
In Part 2 and 3 of A Thousand Splendid Suns, the political unrest and war that plagues Afghanistan becomes more violent and unforgiving. Laila’s house is bombed which results in the deaths of Mammy, her heart-broken mother who lost two of her sons in the fighting, and her dearly beloved father, Hakim. Laila can be seen as the "damsel in distress" in this situation because she is now an orphan who does not have a home. Rasheed witnesses the bombing take place, so he rescues Laila from the rubble and forces Mariam nurse her back to health. Laila later becomes the innocent victim of Rasheed’s abuse when she is forced to marry Rasheed and have a child with him. She is young, inexperienced, and completely blameless. Laila is not as independent as Mariam is because her family provided all the necessities of life for her, including an education. Also, Tariq, who acts as the stereotypical handsome prince in the story, defends Laila from the neighbourhood bullies. Laila is very different from Mariam in that she educated, and more logical, whereas Mariam is naive acts solely on emotion and her limited past experiences.
Innocence v.s. Naivety
Laila is a bold woman who embodies strength through how she responds to Rasheed’s behaviour. Although Mariam can be seen as a strong woman by the end of the novel, she doesn’t question Rasheed, rather she obeys his commands and tries her best to please him. Therefore, readers can view her as being a weak, subservient woman who gives into Rasheed’s commands, and who fails to stand up for women’s rights. Both woman must obey Rasheed to some extent, because he has the power and means to kill them if they disobey him. However, their different personalities cause them to be foils to each other in terms of feminism.
There are several parts during the novel when Mariam is described to be shaking and plagued by anxiety. It is clear that this behaviour is a result of Rasheed’s aloof personality, and his physical and emotional abuse. Rasheed is evidently the antagonist in the story, who seeks to control his wives through the fear that he will beat them to death. Mariam is a humble and obedient woman, who since her childhood, obeys authority figures in order to attain a false sense of affection. At the start of this book, I viewed Mariam as an unheroic character because, due to her mother’s verbal abuse, she struggled to have confidence in herself and her ability to stand up to those who hurt her. Despite this, I am beginning to see her as being more bold and courageous in her actions, and I sense that she will develop into a more likable, heroic character by the end of the novel.

Specific Examples of Archetypes 
There are two less significant examples that can also be considered to be archetypal in this part of the story. Firstly, after Laila gives birth to a baby girl whom they name Aziza (she is Laila and Tariq's child, but Rasheed thinks she is his child), Rasheed is upset that his baby is not a boy. One day when Aziza is crying, Rasheed says to Laila, “I swear, sometimes I want to put that thing in a box and let her float down Kabul River. Like baby Moses” (Hosseini 237). Rasheed’s reference to Moses foreshadows that Aziza is to be like a deliver, who leads the captured Egyptians (Mariam and Laila), out of the Pharaoh’s control (Rasheed), and into a paradise like the Promised Land. His lack of compassion and patience further proves his evil nature. 

Also, one night when Mariam wakes up due to her anxiety, she sees Aziza wide awake beside Laila, who is asleep. This is the first time that Mariam seems to connect with Aziza and show affection to
Northern Mockingbird 
her. It is difficult for Mariam to see Laila’s bond with Aziza because she had seven miscarriages which left her feeling lost and purposeless (especially in the eyes of Rasheed). After she spends time with Aziza, Aziza falls asleep and the narrator reads, “Mockingbirds were singing blithely….” (244). The reference to mockingbirds reminds me of Harper Lee’s novel,To Kill a Mockingbird. I read this book in grade 10, and its primary theme of innocence can be seen in the way Aziza is portrayed to be an innocent child, who may be later subject to Rasheed’s abuse. This example emphasizes that often, when a character such as a child or a woman is essentially good, those who are evil take advantage of their innocence and vulnerability in order to make themselves feel powerful and controlling.
                
                                                                                                                                                 
Bibliography

Khaled Hosseini. "A Thousand Splendid Suns." New York: Riverhead Books, 2007.


"Mockingbird." Wikipedia. Wikimedia Foundation, n.d. Web. 21 July 2016.

"Monday: One Point Japanese Clinic | Japanese Experts Net." Japanese Experts Net. N.p., n.d. Web. 21 July 2016.


Tags: Polygamy, Abuse, Innocence 



Wednesday, July 20, 2016

The Struggle To Attain Equality

Summary
The novel, A Thousand Splendid Suns, tells the story of two Afghan women in the 1960s, as they struggle with different, yet not so different, challenges that prevent them from being truly free and equal members of their male-dominate society.
The novel begins telling the story of Mariam, a 15-year old girl whose mother, Nana, is verbally abusive and makes Mariam believe that she is burden, and a harmai (Hosseini, 4), which means bastard in Farsi. Mariam is an illegitimate child to Jalil, a rich business man who has multiple wives and numerous other children. When Nana, Jalil’s housekeeper, finds out she is pregnant with Mariam, Jalil orders her to move out and live in a home in Herat, Kabul. Although Nana must care for Mariam by herself, Jalil visits his daughter to bring her material items that have no special meaning. After Mariam’s mother commits suicide, she must be marry off at the age of 15 because Jalil sees her as a disgrace to his name. Mariam’s arranged marriage to strict Muslim follower, Rasheed, leaves her feeling empty and lost. When she miscarries her first child, she is feels as if she is a disappointment to Rasheed, who becomes more and more abusive by the day.
Laila, who lives in the same neighbourhood as Mariam and Rasheed, experiences a much different life. Her parents are University educated, so they encourage her to continue on with her learning. Her father tells her to not rush into marriage, rather to take advantage of the increased liberal movement in Afghanistan. Laila, who is almost 10 years younger than Mariam, is a head strong girl who forms a close bond with Tariq, a boy who is a few years older than her.  

Connection to The Kite Runner
I have read Hosseini’s novel, The Kite Runner, which contains a similar writing style and tone as this book. The main characters in The Kite Runner were male, whereas in A Thousand Splendid Suns, the main characters are female. Therefore, I feel that I can better relate to how Mariam and Laila may feel as women whose rights are oppressed. The novel obviously identifies the issue of gender inequality in the Middle East, especially when it comes to education. Mariam is not educated, and struggles to understand her world because of her ignorance. Laila, on the other hand, has a right to education because she is part of a higher class family.

Foreshadowing and Predicting
From reading the Part 1 of this novel, I believe that Mariam’s relationship with Rasheed will only become worst due to their inability to have a child. Rasheed’s previous marriage ended poorly, as both his wife and his son drowned in a lake. After seven miscarriages, Rasheed becomes increasingly angry that he cannot have a child. Also, Mariam notices subtle hints that he is a dangerous and unpredictable man. On day when she is looking through his drawers, she finds an old photo of Rasheed, his wife, and his son. She remarks, “There was something vaguely unsettling about the way Rasheed seemed to loom over them……her unsmiling, sullen face. The way she titled forward subtly, as though she were trying to wriggle free of his hands.” (Hosseini, 84). Although Mariam is subordinate to Rasheed and only wants to please him, I believe that she will not be able to deal with the negativity without separating herself from Rasheed. She will have to make the decision to either get out of the situation, or continue to tolerate Rasheed’s abuse for the rest of her life.

In the beginning of Part 2, which introduces Laila as a new character, I immediately thought that Tariq and Laila would one day be married. They seem to balance each other out, as Laila is an intellectual who is loves learning, and Tariq is brave, and helps to defend Laila when she is attacked by the neighborhood bullies. He is, however, a cripple, and is deemed as “lesser” by many kids his age.

Literary Devices
Hosseini is a very descriptive writer. He likes to include words in his writing that clearly paint an image of what is happening during the course of the novel. He also uses a motif, or a phrase stated early in the novel. Nana tells Mariam that, “As a reminder of how women like us suffer…..How quietly we endure all that falls upon us.” (91). This phrase is repeated once in the first third of the novel, so I can predict that it may be used again later on to reinforce the theme that women have little to no rights in this society. Also, there is a reference to Pinocchio when Mariam is a young child. She asks Jalil to take her to see the first showing of Pinocchio (flashback to the emergence of Disney in pop culture!). I think the author may have used the example of Pinocchio to show that Jalil is a liar, someone who lies directly to his daughter. His endearing character tricks Mariam into believing that he an honest father, when in reality, it is quite clear that he just tries to please Mariam with material items rather than parental love. 

Reflection
When I am reading, I need my environment to be quiet and free of all distractions. I personally find when my family is out of the house, I am able to best concentrate on school work. I often use sticky notes so that I can track important information in my reading and refer back to it quickly.

This novel has reinforced my belief that the social practices of people in the Middle East are directed by Islamic beliefs, and a male-dominate culture. Women are to obey male figures in society, and many do not have the opportunity to be educated and learn about how Western cultures value women's rights and freedoms.


Works Cited

"10 Reasons Why Malala Yousafzai Should Be Every Pakistani's Role Model                                           SHUGHAL." SHUGHAL. N.p., 2015. Web. 20 July 2016.
"A Thousand Splendid Suns." Goodreads. N.p., n.d. Web. 20 July 2016.
Khaled Hosseini. "A Thousand Splendid Suns." New York: Riverhead Books, 2007.
Maanvi. "In Photos: Afghanistan's First Female Graffiti Street Artist." The Quint. N.p., 2016. Web.           20 July 2016.
"Quotes from ‘A Thousand Splendid Suns’ by Khaled Hosseini." Aamil Syed. N.p., 2014. Web. 20             July  2016.

Notes
Here is a link to an article about Afghanistan’s first female graffiti artist, and how she is trying to bring feminism into the spotlight with her artwork: Feminism in Art


Tags: Gender Inequality, Middle East, Right to Education 



Thursday, July 7, 2016

And the Verdict Is.....

Overview
The Hae Lee Murder trial is currently one of the most talked-about murder mysteries in Baltimore, Maryland. Many have been captivated and shocked by its twists and turns, and its various intricate details. Through the podcast, Serial, listeners have been able embark on a year-long journey with Sarah Koenig, the podcast’s narrator, and draw their conclusions on whether they think Adnan Syed, the supposed killer in the case, is in fact guilt of his ex-girlfriend’s murder.
Adnan (left) and his brother, Tanveer (right), in 1998
Photo: Jonathan Hanson, The Guardian 

The Verdict
I would argue that, based on the evidence in the first and last podcast of the series, Hae was not murdered by Adnan. I was originally struggling to weigh the evidence against Adnan with the convictions of his family and friends who said that he was innocent, but at the very end of the last podcast, it had become apparent that Ronald Lee Moore most likely killed Hae in the 21 minutes after school on January 13, 1999. In the first podcast, Sarah Koenig interviews Adnan's family friend Rabia about her view of Adnan, as she had originally brought the case to Sarah. Rabia says that Adnan was a great kid who was successful in his studies, a volunteer for EMT (though Sarah says it was a paid position) and a member of his high school football team. Sarah adds that he was involved in services at his mosque, and that he seemed to be “an incredibly likable and well-liked kid.” With the glaring exception of Jay, every person who knew Adnan said that he couldn’t be the murderer; he was just not that type of person. Further, Sarah, after meeting Adnan, mentions that he has “big eyes like a dairy cow”. She asks listeners how “could someone like that really strangle his girlfriend?” Asia McClain who claims to have seen Adnan at the library during the time of the murder, also trusts that he is innocent in the case. The way in which Rabia, Sarah, Asia and several others depict Adnan, shows that he has a good nature, and that, despite his typical teenage behaviors (drinking, smoking, etc.), he likely didn’t murder Hae. Additionally, Sarah proves in the last podcast that Ronald was a repeat offender who had spent many years in prison. His DNA evidence was linked to the scene, and his release date from jail (January 1/99) supports the theory that he killed Hae on January 13th. A brief, yet informative video of an update of the case today can be found at: https://www.theguardian.com/tv-and-radio/2016/jun/30/adnan-syed-judge-grants-new-trial-serial-podcast-baltimore-murder-case

Blog Posts: Why are they effective?
This blog post is more effective in outlining my stance on the Hae Murder trial than other media texts because it allows viewers to actually read my reasoning rather than just hear, for example, it over a podcast. Often times, viewers find it easier to analyze and respond to content in writing as opposed to listening to content that lacks images or words. 

Works Cited:

Dean, Michelle. "Serial, One Year On: Web Sleuths Keep Making Discoveries in Adnan Syed's Case." The Guardian. Guardian News and Media, 2015. Web. 07 July 2016.

Levin, Sam, and Baynard Woods. "Adnan Syed, Subject of Serial Podcast, Granted a New Trial." The Guardian. Guardian News and Media, 2016. Web. 07 July 2016.

Wednesday, July 6, 2016

Is it a Remix?

Sourced from: Ralph Gatti/Agence France Presse-Getty Images  

David Bowie's Under Pressure v.s. Vanilla Ice's Ice Ice Baby

One example of a song that has been copied, transformed and recombined to produce a remix is Ice Ice Baby. By contrast to Queen and David Bowie’s 1981 hit song Under Pressure, Vanilla Ice recreated the song through several additions and deletions of the original copy. 

In Under Pressure, the opening of the song begins with the upbeat baseline that was copied and remixed in Ice Ice Baby. In the background of the song listeners can hear both clapping and snapping as opposed to what sounds like maracas or the gentle tapping of a drum at the beginning of Vanilla Ice’s song. About 20 seconds into Under Pressure, an electric piano begins playing to create a bridge in the music, and one of the singers sings along to the baseline. Later on in the song, the very high and low notes of the song become evident. At around 2 minutes, 11 seconds, the singers start singing in whispers, which aides in emphasizing the lower parts of the song. In the baseline, as well, the notes are distinct, quick and exaggerated. In Ice Ice Baby, the baseline is altered by repeating one simple note to make the baseline appear shorter, and lengthen the time the notes are played for. This is the main difference between the baselines of the songs. 

The transformation of Under Pressure is further shown through Vanilla Ice’s voice as a rapper. Although he does whisper several times throughout the song, he raps the lyrics as opposed to singing them like Queen and David Bowie. In addition to the change in the why the song is sung, the lyrics in the Vanilla Ice’s version are completely different, and it is obvious that the meaning of the song is different from that of Under Pressure. At around 50 seconds, listeners can hear a change, or transformation, in the overall tone, as deeper, more monotone notes are played to create a less uplifting vibe. 

Overall, I believe that based on this evidence, the baseline of Ice Ice Baby is a remix, as Vanilla Ice put his own spin on the song to make it his own. Therefore it can be concluded that Vanilla Ice doesn’t infringe on the Queen and David Bowie’s copyright to the song. 

Creators should follow several main guidelines to avoid “ripping something off”. It is important for all writers, producers, artists and innovators to realize that all good work comes from an existing source, and that it is the goal of the creator to build upon the existing source instead of reiterating or plagiarizing it. With this knowledge, creators can better understand the need to cite their sources and beware of copyright in several areas of the arts and humanities. I would highly suggest that whenever possible, all creators also try to expose themselves to new people, places and situations to further their creativity. Earlier in Unit 2 it was touched on that creativity can be broken down into several different words or phrases. Building on one’s creative mindset is a skill that can help can creators develop additions for existing sources; and thus, avoid the probability that they will infringe on copyright laws. This activity helped me to utilize the listening strategies taught in the podcast section of this unit, and helped me to become more aware of the importance of creativity in the arts and humanities. 

Tuesday, July 5, 2016

Should English be a Prerequisite to all Universities?

Sourced from: "ENG4U, English." July 5, 2016. <http://www.ontariovirtualschool.ca/register-online/grade-12-courses/eng4u-grade-12u-english/>
English as a Prerequisite

I believe that grade 12 University level English should be a prerequisite in order to attend University for several reasons.
Firstly, taking English help to develop a student’s writing and better prepare them for their post-secondary endeavors. Regardless of what field of study one is attempting to enter, there will always be an element of communication involved in the courses one takes. All students at University must convey their ideas to some extent, whether it be through presentations, essay writing or lab reports. Taking English helps to further build a student’s understanding of how to effectively communicate and explain their own ideas and thoughts.
I additionally believe that taking English helps one to build on their analytical thinking, a key skill that is essential to one’s success-University and beyond. At University and in the workplace, one will be confronted with problematic situations that require them to thinking critically and thoughtfully. Through analyzing challenging texts and making inferences about the content read in class (or online), students develop their critical thinking skills early on in their life, and become better problem solvers.
Lastly, English teaches students that, in literature, perfection is impossible. One’s writing is constantly evolving and there isn’t a "perfect" essay or written analysis. Whereas in math, you can calculate the exact, precise answer in your homework, English requires one to delve deeper into the content and form their own unique arguments. English teachers also help students learn that not everyone will agree with their ideas, and that there is always room for improvement in their writing.

For all of the reasons above, I believe that Grade 12 English should be required in order to attend University.